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Post by Grim Wanderer on Jan 24, 2019 13:04:51 GMT -5
I've got three short stories completed and half a novella of my S&S character. My plan is to complete about 10 stories and publish as a collection before the end of the year. This is in addition to a children's book, an urban fantasy, and a horror/vampire story I've been working on.
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Post by Von K on Jan 26, 2019 18:17:40 GMT -5
I dont really expect much feedback but sometimes I feel I need help to see what Im doing wrong or right...I know I have my share of good and bad ideas but sometimes I dont know one from the other...poor confused me...ha, probably I just cant figure out what I want to write about basically? I hope that makes senxe Is this the kind of feedback you're looking for? www.blackgate.com/2015/08/02/things-your-writing-teacher-never-told-you-a-story-analysis-worksheet/The fan forum here isn't really set up to provide that kind or depth of feedback, but it potentially could if enough members here wanted.
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Post by themirrorthief on Feb 9, 2019 9:56:57 GMT -5
thanks von
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Post by themirrorthief on May 19, 2019 22:24:06 GMT -5
will write for weed, I don't smoke it but my girlfriend does...and when she does...wow!!!!
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Post by themirrorthief on May 28, 2019 23:04:57 GMT -5
shut up, women avoid you like the plague
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Post by themirrorthief on Mar 18, 2020 21:52:00 GMT -5
as long as I work like a dog and get paycheck, the ladies will never completely avoid me...a truism
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Post by themirrorthief on Mar 18, 2020 21:52:32 GMT -5
ha, that made me almost laugh
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Post by Von K on Apr 30, 2020 17:56:00 GMT -5
I dont really expect much feedback but sometimes I feel I need help to see what Im doing wrong or right...I know I have my share of good and bad ideas but sometimes I dont know one from the other...poor confused me...ha, probably I just cant figure out what I want to write about basically? I hope that makes senxe Hi mirrorthief I found an online critique site that might be useful to you (and perhaps others here?). First page only, 400 word limit. There's also an archive of past critiques: killzoneblog.com/first-page-critiques-at-tkz
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Post by themirrorthief on Apr 30, 2020 19:59:10 GMT -5
they would murder me...besides Ive given it up except for poetry
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Post by Char-Vell on May 1, 2020 12:56:47 GMT -5
I dont really expect much feedback but sometimes I feel I need help to see what Im doing wrong or right...I know I have my share of good and bad ideas but sometimes I dont know one from the other...poor confused me...ha, probably I just cant figure out what I want to write about basically? I hope that makes senxe Hi mirrorthief I found an online critique site that might be useful to you (and perhaps others here?). First page only, 400 word limit. There's also an archive of past critiques: killzoneblog.com/first-page-critiques-at-tkzI'll bite. If you don't hear back from me you'll know it was a savage beatdown
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Post by themirrorthief on May 1, 2020 13:35:06 GMT -5
go for it amigo...
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Post by Von K on May 1, 2020 18:37:29 GMT -5
I might send them a piece of mine too.
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Post by themirrorthief on May 17, 2020 14:48:36 GMT -5
will write for toilet tissue
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Post by Char-Vell on May 24, 2020 12:17:45 GMT -5
I got my critique back, it was not too brutal. Apparently I overdid it with details. I will keep this criticism on mind for future edits.
It's going to be hard to let go of my beloved sagaris.
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Post by themirrorthief on May 24, 2020 12:54:28 GMT -5
u got to do it your way...I give you high marks
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